Governments in some countries spend large amounts of money on arts, music, and theatre. While I believe that the funds should be allocated to public services, I also accept the fact that, arts, music, the theatre has an importance for every nation.
There are several reasons why governments should invest in public services such as education, health, transportation, roads and so on. Firstly, if government reallocated the money on education, many thousands of people could be lifted out of poverty or given a better quality of life. For instance, when I was a child, I had an opportunity to study in a good school which was adapted to students' needs and technology change, and it had a great impact in my further education, then in my social status and in my life. Secondly, without an investment of government in health, the health of any society may decline. In this case, people would have poor health and it could lead to many issues in society in every aspect. Finally, if the government does not spend its funds on public services, a country can lag behind compared to other developed countries.
On the other hand, I suppose that government should make a budget on arts, music, theatre as well. The first reason why is art represents the history and culture of a nation. Otherwise, a country would not be complete.
Next, it is relaxation therapy for people. When they want to entertain, the first thing that comes to their mind is going to cinema or concert or visiting museums. Last but not least, a government can benefit it a lot. For example, while painters are having some galleries and selling them or movie industry
are shooting many films, the government can receive huge amounts of taxes from them.
In conclusion, I guess that for the government there should be a balance between both, spending money on arts, music, theatre and public services, too.
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 89
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 67
- In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extend do you agree or disagree wi 96
- Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.To what extent do you agree with this view? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i guess, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86604361371 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63226787265 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7613052482 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237701319493 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771192497137 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736405189749 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116200077256 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632901008993 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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