The graph below show the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows information about the library at Starmouth School from 2009 to 2012. It shows the number of library books read by schoolchildren during four-year period.
Overall, the number of books read by schoolgirls showed a strong upward trend. However, boys were read more books than girls between 2009 and 2010, but their number declined to under the girls’ level in the end of period.
This graph shows the distinctive movement between schoolboys and schoolgirls. The number of books read by girls increased slightly between 2009 and 2010, from approximately 25 to 40. What is more, th...
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However, boys were read more books than girls between 2009 and 2010, but their number declined to under the girls’ level in the end of period.
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 171 200
No. of Characters: 802 1000
No. of Different Words: 85 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.616 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.69 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.382 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.85 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.44 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.603 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4