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the graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line chart describes the popularity of four different types of food consumed in European countries between 1979 and 2004. Overall, the trend of food consumption wasn't uniform. The chicken consumers increased dramatically, while beef, lamb and fish fell steadily.
Firstly, in 1979 the lowest consumption was chicken and fish . The chicken started approximately 150 grams per person per week. However, after 1984 the consumption of the chicken rose gradually and then increased significantly and finally ended at 250 grams per person per week in 2004. Whereas, the fish ...
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Sentence: However, in the year 1979 and 2004 the trend of the chicken, beef and lamb were fluctuating wildly.
Description: The fragment fluctuating wildly . is not usually preceded by were
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace were with was
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