The graph shows the annual fishing in North Amarica and canada from 1972 to 1998 .
The line graph represents information about fishing in US and Canada between 27 years period. The vertical axis hightlights annual fishing in million of tonnes and horizontal illustrates time period.
It is clearly seen that from 1972 to 1978 the average of fishing in US remained constent about 1 million tonnes and it gradually increased 0.1% between 1979 and1989. Annual fishing gradually deceased from 1.1 million to 0.8 from 1990 to 1998. Fishing average pf Canada was rising with flactuations from about 3 million tonnes to 5.2million tonnes from 1972 to 1986 and it witnessed a decline from 1987 to 1998 and reached at 4 million tonnes.
The line graph shows annual fish average of both were suddenly decreased 0.3% during 1990 to 1998 but there was a great difference in the average of fishing in first decade.Then fish avarage of US was stable there for flactuated in canada in same time.
To conclude, it is clearly seen that annual fishing of Canada overwight fishing of US and make a peak point in 1986.
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Sentence: The vertical axis hightlights annual fishing in million of tonnes and horizontal illustrates time period.
Error: hightlights Suggestion: highlights
Sentence: It is clearly seen that from 1972 to 1978 the average of fishing in US remained constent about 1 million tonnes and it gradually increased 0.1 between 1979 and1989.
Error: and1989 Suggestion: and 1989
Error: constent Suggestion: constant
Sentence: Fishing average pf Canada was rising with flactuations from about 3 million tonnes to 5.2million tonnes from 1972 to 1986 and it witnessed a decline from 1987 to 1998 and reached at 4 million tonnes.
Error: flactuations Suggestion: fluctuations
Sentence: The line graph shows annual fish average of both were suddenly decreased 0.3 during 1990 to 1998 but there was a great difference in the average of fishing in first decade.Then fish avarage of US was stable there for flactuated in canada in same time.
Error: avarage Suggestion: average
Sentence: To conclude, it is clearly seen that annual fishing of Canada overwight fishing of US and make a peak point in 1986.
Error: overwight Suggestion: overweight
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