Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding.
Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages
Nowadays governments offer financial support for certain amount of students in specific areas of education. Therefore, it rises a discussion about choosing the most suitable students, precisely, some people claim that a country can get better results if such funding will be given for the students who are teaching according to the demands of the modern life. In contrast, others insist on sharing government support among the students equally. In my opinion, it will be honest to give students financial support depending on their abilities, not only the study areas they chose, and I am going to explain my opinion with some facts below.
Firstly, it is undeniable fact that technological development of the world changes the content of jobs. I mean in comparison with previous years nowadays there are great demands for people in innovative areas, such as computer engineering, or information technologies etc. For instance, in our country the agricultural section was more likely to develop in the 1990s, so government tried to provide necessary facilities and financial resources to qualify workers in this sphere whereas today specialists in the industrial and information fields are more important than the indicated ones.
However, to my mind a number of disadvantages will be unavoidable if the government applies this policy, to be more precise, development only in certain fields may not result with the improvement of whole economy of the country. Furthermore, there may be great amount of students with specific abilities in less relevant subjects and discrimination between such students will probably cause negative effects on education systems.
In conclusion, taking account all indicated facts above I think following the idea given on the statement can be damage the education not improve it.
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