Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have on our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Personality is a very important trait that helps in the development of an individual. Like the saying “First Impression is the best impression”, personality gives the first impression to anyone who we meet. Personality is often mistaken to be only physical appearance but it is a combination of attitude, aptitude and behavior. Development of personality in a human being starts from the day a person is born.
Today as technology is improving in a very fast pace, we tend to understand the importance of inherited characteristics, thanks to the field of genetic engineering. Some researchers...
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- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have on our life Which do you consider to be the major influence 77
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