Researches have found that the characteristics that a person has with himself/herself from birth is more effective on the person's personality and development than the experiences that the person will experience during his/her life-time.
Every person on the world has a different and unique character, and the character includes personality, habits and other factors.
It is clear that by the time passes people grow and change, by changing the personality also changes in some other ways, but we can not definitely say everyone's personality changes by the time. For instance, if a person is born with an angry personality, the person will carry out the personality till the end of her/his life-long. Although the personality does not changes in some people, it is possible to work on it and changes it. Because everyone is capable of changing, but some people takes a long time to change and some do not. In addition, developing depends on how the person uses her/his brain and capacity, for example, if someone was able to solve difficult maths, the person would solve more difficult maths by working hard and using his/her brain.
On the other hand, one of the major factors that influences a person's personality and developing is experience. Not only experience gives a person different looking on the things, but also it helps to choose between the right and wrong. And people prefer to have fewer mistakes in life so they try things and at the end they learn either it is bad or not. Experiencing an accident that has caused by a person's personality that loves exciting adventures, might teach the person not to do that thing again.
I agree with both sides, and I believe that both of characteristics from birth and experiences are very considerable, however, at the end it might be different in each person. All depends on a person's enviroment that she/he is living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...elf from birth is more effective on the persons personality and development than the ex...
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Line 4, column 366, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...long. Although the personality does not changes in some people, it is possible to work ...
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Line 6, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... of the major factors that influences a persons personality and developing is experienc...
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Line 6, column 403, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...encing an accident that has caused by a persons personality that loves exciting adventu...
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Line 8, column 192, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...ifferent in each person. All depends on a persons enviroment that she/he is living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97784810127 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85793485229 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6130589795 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232355718214 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846230174006 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707701993255 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136189431144 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847680985839 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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