Certainly, many discoveries demonstrate that genes play crucial role in human body to develop their personality. However, some experiences play as same role. But, from my prospective, both characteristics are very important for development and achieve our goal. In upcoming paragraph i will discuss both the criteria.
To embark upon, majority of individuals reckon that the characteristics with we are born they have too much importance in our personality and as well as development. Therefore, some researches shown that the genes are in our body which have automatic come in our body helps to make good status and also helps to achieve our goals but, few says that mostly individuals prefer to do that work which was did by their grandparents and guardians. For example, if we talk about a musician, their genes are naturally come in their children and mostly we seen that singers kids opt to their guardians profession.
Nonetheless, mostly people think that social experiences helps individuals to make personality and to to do development in their life. For instance like a businessman they take a lot of risks regarding to their business if they don not get loss in their work so, how they can have experience to earn more money. With the helps of experiences next time they would be think twice to start their work strongly and then, they can earn profit and achieve their goal.
In conclusion, both characteristics are play important role in our life. Only with genes we cannot do development in our life and also with experiences as well but, i think experiences is the major influence by this, we can learn more and failure leads to success.
- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have on our life.Which do you consider to be the major influence? 61
- In modern world, many children spend a lot of time in front of computers,television and smartphones. This is very harmful to them. To what extent do you agree. 61
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. 56
- Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news While others believe that more effective way is through other media Discuss both views and give your own opinion 79
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97841726619 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91784051688 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514388489209 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2300280322 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329957839686 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12105292474 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106834472743 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209741929011 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120957316724 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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