The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Some people agree, some others disagree. Discuss both view.
It is a fact that advertisements are now widespread on mass media. Some people believe that these do not serve any beneficial purposes, and even spoil the society, there should be an advertising restriction to hinder their negative impacts on customers. Advocates of advertising argue that these commercials bring us much more values which are crucial in our ever-increasing society. Personally, I am of mixed opinion on that.
First of all, it is undeniable that advertisement can inform people about different products and services. There is an extensive diversity of goods in the market nowadays...
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Be sensitive to use 'On the other hand', 'However','Nonetheless' in the essays.
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Category: Very Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 319 350
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No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.041 4.6
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.473 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
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