Some people think spending a lot on birthday celebrations and wedding is a waste of money. Other think that it is important to the young people and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is generally said,"happiness are just like a butterfly when you keep, it goes far if you leave it comes away"and celebration of special occasions has a immense place in our life. Hence,there are argument both for spending money on birthday and marriage celebration is wastage or not.
To begin with,bounding strong relationship. As young people are in rat race of accomplishing money and success but much time is spent on computer because they have hectic sechdule so that less time is given to family members by young people in this situation celebration is the great way to be with reaports....
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Sentence: It is generally said,'happiness are just like a butterfly when you keep, it goes far if you leave it comes away'and celebration of special occasions has a immense place in our life.
Description: The fragment are just like is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: To begin with,bounding strong relationship.
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Sentence: On the other hand a negative wind is also there, as universally accepted,'money is power'some people think a big amount of money is invested to orngnized a high class party to arranging verity of food, perfect place, excellent service and many more which are unnecessary things.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and orngnized
Description: A determiner/pronoun, post-determiner is not usually followed by a WH-determiner
Suggestion: Refer to more and which
Sentence: However, in this materialistic era, prices of living good and basic needed has more than double comparison of past so they do not have sufficient money to arrange a party but money has to borrowed by young only for flack image.
Description: A verb, past participle is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to needed and has
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and borrowed
Sentence: As per my above discussion,it is evident that , spending a lot of money to celebrating parties is wastage of money and there are some another way which make us happy as well as more satisfied reather that parties.
Description: The word some is not usually used as an adverb
Suggestion: Refer to some
Description: The fragment which make us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Sentence: As young people are in rat race of accomplishing money and success but much time is spent on computer because they have hectic sechdule so that less time is given to family members by young people in this situation celebration is the great way to be with reaports.
Error: sechdule Suggestion: schedule
Error: reaports Suggestion: reports
Sentence: On the other hand a negative wind is also there, as universally accepted,'money is power'some people think a big amount of money is invested to orngnized a high class party to arranging verity of food, perfect place, excellent service and many more which are unnecessary things.
Error: verity Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: orngnized Suggestion: organized
Sentence: Hindustan magazine reveald that majority of young generation invest larger amounts of money on parties and having expensive dresses on those which are useless but they have to wear fashionable clothes for eye poping.
Error: poping Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: reveald Suggestion: reveal
Sentence: As per my above discussion,it is evident that , spending a lot of money to celebrating parties is wastage of money and there are some another way which make us happy as well as more satisfied reather that parties.
Error: reather Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1678 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.674 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.586 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.448 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.639 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5