the table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999
The table illustrates the 7 different types of families are living in poverty in Australia in 1999. The figures measured in percentage. It is immediately apparent that Sole parents and single with no children are living in poverty, at 21% and 19%.
To begin with, there is large number of people from each household type living in the poverty. Majority of the people from sole parents and single with no children are living in poverty, at 21%, 19 % respectively. On the other side, the people who are single aged, aged couple and couple with no children are living in less poverty approximately at 6%, 4% and 7% respectively, which is half of the above mentioned categories.
Moreover, Couple with the children and all household have substantially similar figures at 11%. It is very clear that the families that have less number of the people in the family had less poverty as compare to other categories.
In conclusion, sole parents were living in extreme poverty while the aged people were living in least poverty.
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The table illustrates the 7 different types of families are living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The table illustrates 7 different types of families which are living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
he figures measured in percentage.
he figures are measured in percentage.
there is large number of people
there is a large number of people
...respectively, which is half of the above mentioned categories.
Description: 'which' refers to what here?
Sentence: It is very clear that the families that have less number of the people in the family had less poverty as compare to other categories.
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Suggestion: Refer to as and compare
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