The figures below show the levels of attendance at the four music events among the English adult population in 2005.
The bar charts elucidate the percentage of UK attendance in four musical events; opera, jazz, classical and other live music in 2005.
It is apparent that, the majority of people have not attended to any musical events in the year of 2005. Most of attenders at any given type of music event attended once or twice a year.
A 96% of British citizens have not joined for opera, which was closely followed by jazz (94%) and classical music (92%). This means that the remaining percentage of people of 4%, 6% and 8%, have attended for opera, jazz and classical music at least once a year, respectively. As showed from the graph that 3% of British people enjoyed opera at least once a year whilst 4% and 5% of UK citizens visited the musical events for jazz and classical musical events, respectively. Lesser than 5% of residents of UK have visited classical, jazz and opera more times than one to two times a year.
Playing a musical instrument for pleasure is the most popular musical event for UK citizens (24% attended). 13% of those joined live music events at least once a year whereas 8% of the total UK citizens attended more than 3 to 4 times in a year.
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residents of UK visited more
residents of UK visited more of live music events than those of classical, jazz and opera.
residents of UK have visited classical, jazz and opera more times than one to two times a year.
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