The graph illustrates 4 kinds of meat production(chiken,beef,lamb,fish) which was consumed in European country between 1979 and 2004.Units are measured in grams per person per week.
Overall, the expenditure of fish,lamb and beef decreased over period given while chicken, it rose.At the start of periods,beef was the most popular meat production, which was replaced by chiken in 1989 which the most widely used production in the final year.
With regards to the amount of lamb used,it began at 150 grams and then fluctuated gradually. In the first year it was just 50 grams. Equally, cow's meat which was over 200 grams changed in all periods and in the end showed just around 100 grams.Whereas fish consuption, which was the least popular expenditure, was about 50 grams in 1979 and then there was slight fluctuate in the next 24 years.In 2004 the amount of first consuption was under 50 grams.
On the other hand, the expenditure of chiken which started at under 150 grams and changed rapidly.This figure, reached a high just over 250 grams in approximately 2002 and 2 years later reduced to 250 grams.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'so', 'then', 'whereas', 'while', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252293577982 0.268076937826 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.123853211009 0.116061578633 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0596330275229 0.0759168565197 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0596330275229 0.0366838410393 163% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0137614678899 0.0131127313244 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142201834862 0.155750635184 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0366972477064 0.0379272487307 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.34339071973 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00917431192661 0.0210936926555 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0733944954128 0.0948980150116 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0275229357798 0.00967000014798 285% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1120.0 1161.00487805 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.9 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05405405405 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297297297297 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227027027027 0.247514529752 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151351351351 0.171178102325 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108108108108 0.112407865282 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34339071973 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.546246751206 107% => OK
Word variations: 53.200848209 49.3433353143 108% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 30.8333333333 23.0094962315 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.1971355545 42.9750493124 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.666666667 135.714022679 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 23.0094962315 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.48048780488 1081% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.536036036 47.7609492067 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.18604651163 2.94281807926 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312401018848 0.418131533498 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.278470174633 0.181151798455 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116920491845 0.0850326197045 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.833676463159 0.706616315825 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.219800654617 0.157042692854 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195477680904 0.228904883108 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078760533936 0.108899403657 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.376542186181 0.367819155151 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0383643724307 0.0812612215331 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237737031055 0.316326947829 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589514528818 0.0921553760075 64% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9