The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph provides a breakdown of information in terms of how many number of books which is read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 to 2014 over a-3 year period. It is measured in the thousand of books.
Overall, what stands out from the graph reveals that men pointed put a strong upward trend, even though women showed a highest number during the three years at the beginning of period.
A more detailed look at the figure examines those men who were read book stood at roughly 2000, which the position was lower than women, showing at more than double number. In the next year, the figure of men increased slightly at almost 4000. The striking points, in 2013 between men and women witnessed a similar number of books, hitting about 1000. However, in the end of the year, women accounted for a dramatic fall at 8000. By contrast, the high number of reader who read by men in 2014, peak at 14.000.
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books which is read by men and women
books which are read by men and women
A more detailed look at the figure examines those men who were read book stood at roughly 2000, which the position was lower than women, showing at more than double number.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
showed a highest number
showed the highest number
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 167 200
No. of Characters: 733 1000
No. of Different Words: 102 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.595 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.389 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.096 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 29 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.306 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.439 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.615 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.06 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4