The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the graph which illustrates the numbers of books by both genders at Burnaby Public Library in the period of four years: from 2011 to 2014.
Overall, it is obviously seen that the progression of books read by men is various from the other gender’s growth.
To begin with, starting 5000 books which were read by women in 2011, the numbers of books read by female rose steadily to 8000 in 2002 and continued to 10000 in 2013. However, during 2013-2014, the progression of books read by women dropped dramatically to only 8000 at the end of this period.
On the other hand, the number of books read by men at the starting point was lower than the women figure by 2000.the growth of numbers of books read by men slightly increased to 4000 in 2012 and jumped to 1000 rapidly in 2013 which carried the same data with the opposite gender. Consequently, the progression of books that men read went up to the peak at 14000 in 2014.
To sum up, women read books smaller amount than men at the beginning of the period, however, men changed to read more books than women at the following times of this period.
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women read books smaller amount
women read books in a smaller amount
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 202 200
No. of Characters: 882 1000
No. of Different Words: 95 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.77 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.366 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.235 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.256 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.563 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.805 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.195 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4