The number of marriages and divorce in the USA between 1970 and 2000
The chart represents information about different number of marriages and divorce in the USA between 1970 and 2000. And the percentage of the marital status of adult American in two of the years.
It is clear that the number of marriages is establish between 1970 and 1980 reaching to 2,5 millions. After 1980, the total people was married slight decrease. The biggest marital status of adult American is married between 1970 and 2000.
In 1980, the number of divorce decrease around to 1,4 millions. On the other hand, married and divorce have different number by around 1,5 million. Number of divorce have on top in 1980 reaching to peak 1,4 million.
In 1970 the divorced status of adult American have smallest number less than 10% and the married status reached 70 % of the marital status.
The chart represents information
The chart represents the information
And the percentage of the marital status of adult American in two of the years.
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Sentence: It is clear that the number of marriages is establish between 1970 and 1980 reaching to 2,5 millions.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and establish
Sentence: After 1980, the total people was married slight decrease.
Description: The fragment the total people is not usually followed by was
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace was with were
the number of divorce decrease
the number of divorce decreases
Sentence: In 1970 the divorced status of adult American have smallest number less than 10 and the married status reached 70 of the marital status.
Description: A verb, past tense is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to have and smallest
Description: The word less is not usually used as an adverb, comparative
Suggestion: Refer to less
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 135 200
Minimum 150 words wanted
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Score: 3.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 135 200
No. of Characters: 640 1000
No. of Different Words: 64 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.409 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.741 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.303 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.216 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.111 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.478 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.715 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4