The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
The table informs that the changes of average distance happened in between 1985 and 2000 in England travelling modes. It is noticeable that distance of travelling in all modes considerably inclined from 1985 to 2000. The increase was nearly a half of average distance in 1985. Overall, mode of transportation which was used extensively in travelling was a car in both years.
In 1985, the average distance of travelling in a car experienced almost more than three quarter of all modes’ distance at 3,199 miles per person per year. This number was followed by the common distance of other modes which reached 450 miles. After that, there were mainly 429 miles distance of local bus travelling per person in one year in the same period.
By the year of 2000, the average distances of travel increased in the journey with car, train, long distance bus, taxi, and the other modes. Contrarily, decreasing length of distances in common occured in travelling by walking, bycicle, and local bus at the same year. A dramatic decrease of length was experienced by local bus travel which went down to approximately one half of the average distance in 1985. Meanwhile, the most significant incline occurred in taxi travel from 13 miles to 42 miles.
the changes of average distance happened in between 1985 and 2000
the changes of average distance happened between 1985 and 2000
in England travelling modes.
in England's travelling modes.
Sentence: After that, there were mainly 429 miles distance of local bus travelling per person in one year in the same period.
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Suggestion: Refer to miles and distance
Sentence: Contrarily, decreasing length of distances in common occured in travelling by walking, bycicle, and local bus at the same year.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Words: 209 200
No. of Characters: 1002 1000
No. of Different Words: 99 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.802 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.794 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 60
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