2 Maps: Islip town centre now and in the future
The maps depict the current structure of central town of Islip, and its future plan of development. It can be seen from the future planning that the town will get a complete makeover, and several new structure will be built.
The town currently has one main road and two sub roads connecting most of the amenities of the town. While shops are located both side of the main roads, school and the park is accessible from the side roads, one at west of the main road and another at the east of the main road. However, there is no special road for housing area and countryside.
In the future town plan, the entire town will we surrounded by a dual carriageway road. The main road will be replaced by pedestrian road and the shops to the north of the main will be restructured, and various new constructions such as Bus station, Shopping center and car park will be added. However, the shops to the south of the main will remain the same.
The old housing areas will be accessible by the new circular roads while tow new housing colonies will be added to the town; one will be placed near the shops, and other one will be placed to the east of the new car park. Interestingly, the size of the park will be reduced, almost to the half of its original size, and no changes will be made on the school, which will be connected via circular road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44578313253 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36224476279 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469879518072 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2163924935 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.7 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096114369142 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682975787951 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865145043254 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841455848979 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695432757427 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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