Advantage and Disadvantage for Young People Work Early
Nowadays, it is believed that the young people in some countries are supported to work or travel for a year after finishing their high school until before starting at universities. In this essay, I totally agree because it gives more advantages more advantage rather than disadvantage for reasons.
It is important toi give the young people some experiences about working world. That is because the young people has to be prepared before they are going to work especially for their mental. In some countries like Japan, the young people are given the opportunity to work first so when they graduate from universities they have enough readiness for going to work. As a result was prepared before, so their productivity are good rather than they who do not prepared. It is important to give them time to find out themselves by work before going to universities.
On the other hand that things can reducing the desire of the young people to continue learning at universities. For some cases when that younger can earn money that is created comfort zone to find more money. That situation can be damaged their mind system which just focus on money than to grow by knowledge. Like in Indonesia, many graduated from high school prefer to work eventhough they have ability to studies at college. So, there are many workstaff just can be do general jobs beside special jobs. Then the specific jobs position are taking by specialist from outside Indonesia. It is no doubt that causes some social economic problem if this things has not manage very well.
So in my opinion it is a good way to supplies the young people with a lot off experiences before going to universities. The government must be mediate the private sector or companies for opening many occasion for that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 648, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... causes some social economic problem if this things has not manage very well. So ...
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Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'managed'.
Suggestion: managed
...economic problem if this things has not manage very well. So in my opinion it is a ...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occasions'.
Suggestion: many occasions
...private sector or companies for opening many occasion for that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, well, as to, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 965.302439024 153% => OK
No of words: 302.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88410596026 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58736221395 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543046357616 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3082916298 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330206847407 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103461267518 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947916064283 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214503425142 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980111222369 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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