Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In recent years, people tend to switch the way they work from going to the office to stay at home and finish their workload online, while for children, they also experience online classes thanks to the cheap price and accessibility of technology. In my opinion, the negative effect of this trend definitely outweighs the positive ones. To elaborate my idea, I would like to have a further discussion in the articles below.
At first, because of the advance in modern technology, residents nowadays often prefer working and studying via Internet platform to being in the offices or classes. In fact, there are some advantages concerning this issue since the flexibility of such convenience would give people more time to do their own business or even take care of themselves. Furthermore, they could spend more time with their family and minimize the risk of being late for their work or study.
In contrast, the disadvantage is beyond the optimistic outcome. If human gradually overuses online platform, although for working and studying, it may cause some bad effect on their mental and physical health, such as: depression, obesity, diabetes or even shortsighted. According to VnExpress report in 2021, 40% of adults answered that they suffered from stress and some sickness relating too their eyesight as they use technology devices more than 3 hours per day.
In conclusion, in spite of giving us so many benefits, technology has its own limits, therefore, instead of staying at home, going to the workplace or school seems to be a better solution, not only to improve ones' health, but also develop the connection between human in a community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... a better solution, not only to improve ones health, but also develop the connection...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09191176471 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71324276661 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 106.607317073 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669117647059 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4611402152 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 5.23603664747 256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225178003974 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705137433944 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437872153317 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118427104759 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191150257883 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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