Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Thanks to the modernization and progression of our world these days, it is no longer a rarity for humans to get easy access to technology such as office work at home and online learning. This achievement has both benefits and drawbacks, but if weigh up its pros and cons, I strongly believe that the first outweighs the latter.
On the one hand, the development of such high technology may be the culprit of the distant attitude of some individuals. It is undeniable that working and studying from home means that hardly do we need to go out just because with a laptop or a smart phone, we can get through to our partners to have a meeting or an online lesson. Lacking interaction and face-to-face conversations certainly becomes an inevitable consequence. Also, this is the ultimate answer to the afore-mentioned issue of more and more callous people outside the society.
On the other hand, the advancement of technology is the clearest testament to the globalized development of the entire world. Not only does it provide workers and learners with a great deal of reliable and valuable information sources, but it is also of use when updating people with the latest trends and informative notions, especially in such nerve-racking social lockdown due to Covid-19 nowadays. What's more, this hi-tech revolution is deemed to be the major inspiration and motivation for novel inventions and the creative ritual world to progress which are dominant catalysts for further success and triumph in the economic sectors in many countries. For example, many developed nations, like the USA or France, with the help of modern technology, it is obvious that their productivity always remains high and stable without requiring too much labor force or time loss.
In conclusion, I hold a firm belief that modern technology is of paramount importance, playing an indispensable role in our daily life. Although it still causes humans certain problems, this is undoubtedly a positive development more than a negative one.
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 89
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 78
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 89
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 965.302439024 175% => OK
No of words: 330.0 196.424390244 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10909090909 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96149764808 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 106.607317073 196% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 283.868780488 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8950199355 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259801113238 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078443633396 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546300013584 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138242123478 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370719367544 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 40.7170731707 241% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.