the bar and line graph illustrates use of speed camera along with numerical information on road accident for the city which is in Melbourne.
the bar and line graph illustrates use of speed camera along with numerical information on road accident for the city which is in Melbourne.
first bar graph for started from 2002 in this year only 25 cameras used in Melbourne have a power after 1 year it was increased after the double of last year is nearly 50 in 2003 number of speed cameras were used also show price of in 2004 from half of hundred to more than hundred normal changes was shown in the year 2005 which was highest among every year and it was around 150.
in the line graph accidents ratio was quite above from 3% in 2002 whereas in that your percentage of that was in ten affection after the measurement of your accident number was slightly increased from last couple of yours in the year of 2004 death ratio was started from initial point which was one end of the year both show increment in the numbers.
overall number of speed cameras in Melbourne city was constantly increasing every year was accident ratio was quite higher than that death.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59459459459 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19358251194 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.530832816 43.030603864 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.5 112.824112599 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.25 22.9334400587 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298624650692 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.327689541111 0.103423049105 317% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.388666865714 0.0843802449381 461% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327689541111 0.15604864568 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.388666865714 0.0819641961636 474% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.2329268293 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.17 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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