Thr graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emission person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 in 2007.
The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emission per person in four different countries(the Great Britain, Sweden, Italy and Portugal) over a 40 years of period.
Overall, it can be seen that average carbon dioxide emissions per person in Portugal and Italy increased, whereas in United Kingdom and Sweden decreased over the period shown.
Looking at the chat in more detail, it is evident that every CO2 emissions in Portugal increased from around 1 metric tonnes in 1967 to around 5 metric tonnes in 2007. Similarly,Italy was started at four metric tonnes in 1967 28 metric tonnes in 2007.
Turning to the remaining data sets, it is clear that Sweden showed dramatic change in graph over a given period. In sweden, average CO2 emission per person was 28 pounds in 1967 after that it went up to 18 towns in 1977 then went down to fight tones in 2007. Apart from that,average carbon dioxide released per person in United Kingdom slightly decreases from 10 tonnes in 1967 29 tonnes in 2007,which was the minimal change in whole graph.
- The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. 67
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 67
- Thr graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emission person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 in 2007. 73
- nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy .do you think its advantage of outweigh disadvantage? 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Italy
...round 5 metric tonnes in 2007. Similarly,Italy was started at four metric tonnes in 19...
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Line 13, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , average
... to fight tones in 2007. Apart from that,average carbon dioxide released per person in U...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, similarly, so, then, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92737430168 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48305012123 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530726256983 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5046580706 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44375178428 0.215688989381 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20582593206 0.103423049105 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915662335555 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282016828963 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860164005742 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.