The bar chart illustrates the information about that people living in urban areas in different places all over the world. Units are measured in percentage.
First and foremost, the maximum number of population in North America and the minimum in Africa. Other four areas Asia , Europe, Latin America / Caribbean and Oceania are lies in middle of these countries. Therefore the major difference only between North America and Africa.
To begin with, the North America have maximum different number of percentages in different years. 64% in 1950, 79% in 2007 and 90% in 2050. The second highest area is Latin America / Caribbean, 42% in 1950, 76% in 2007 and 89% in 2050. The third highest is Europe, 84% in 2050, 72% in 2007, but the third highest in 1950 is Oceania at the place of Europe. it is 52% in 1950. The second lowest population is Asia, 17% in 1950, 41% in 2007 and 66% in 2050. The lowest is in Africa, 15% 1950, 37% in 2007 and 62% in 2050.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, therefore, third, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62352941176 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36942049806 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5815216888 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187552013848 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690219377572 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128095899341 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181731733199 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165651713027 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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