The bar chart below provides information about the time spent in leisure activities by males and females in the USA in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates, the amount of time used for free time activities and sports in USA citizen in both gender by the year of 2014.
Overall, it has been clear from the graph that, males spent more time for leisure activities compared to females in terms of sports, recreation, computer games and for watching TV. Although, most of the people spent time in front of television among the other activities irrespective of gender.
To begin with, overwhelming majority of people used to spent time for watching TV though, males was the highest position with 3 hours while, females spent about 2.6 hours. For socializing and communicating, and for relaxing or thinking both genders used same hours which is 0.7 hours and 0.3 hours respectively. Moreover, males spent lowest amount of time for reading with 0.3 hours, in turn, females makes up reading with 0.4 hours in their extra hours in USA.
Similarly, with regards to sports, exercise and recreation males account for 0.4 hours which is double than females such as mere 0.2 hours. In comparison, females use less amount of time for this among given activities. However, only 0.1 hour difference between males (0.5) and females (0.4) in order to do leisure activities in computer for fun and other leisure activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on, computer games and for watching TV. Although, most of the people spent time in front...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the lowest'.
Suggestion: spent the lowest
...0.3 hours respectively. Moreover, males spent lowest amount of time for reading with 0.3 hou...
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Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly 0.1 hour difference between males 0.5 and females 0.4 in order to do leisure a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, similarly, so, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00469483568 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58238155256 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3762202653 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.444444444 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181540967265 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940417260309 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428368789046 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131405958021 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161626976415 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.