Some companies sponsors sports as a way of advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sponsoring sports events are one way of advertising for companies. It is believed by some that it is a positive attitude whereas some others oppose the ideas and express some negative impacts on this. I agree with the sponsorships because the effects would influence a vast majority of people reasonable and the companies are not annoying the audience forcefully.
On the one hand, people who disagree with the event sponsors often think it would distract the spectacles and distant audience to interrupt the play. Similarly, companies have the power to control the players and event places to explore their products newly. For instance, cricket stadiums and premiere league hosting countries. However, these companies do not make any forceful action to buy their products in contrast, viewers would be able to choose.
On the other hand, it would be a great help for the sports councils to provide more opportunities for a sportsman or team members to watch and play games. To explain that, many national councils had limited funds for hosting and organizing events. Apart from that, good companies are always a great help for the players to play well and get a chance to sponsor themselves for the next auction. In that sense, even though the companies choose the platform of sports events as their advertisement it would be helpful not only to the games but also to the gamers.
To sum up, companies providing ads for sports events is a major trend to explore them in the world. Nevertheless, in my opinion, the outcome is equally good for the corporations, events and the players rather than the minor objections.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, whereas, apart from, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0036900369 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65379593446 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9487678339 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207425122395 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710485001934 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569525842325 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12761676923 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071617311455 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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