The bar chart below shows the of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the proportion of Australian People from both gender among various age groups involving in regular physical activity in the year 2010.Comparison between men and women and People’s Age group ranges from 15 - 65 and above.
Overall,Female had the highest proportion of being physically active compared to males.Maximum Physical activity can be observed in Female between ages of 45 - 54 and in males between ages 15 - 24 .Men and women were least involved in physical activity in 35 - 44 and 15 - 24 years age group respectively.
People in 15 - 24 years group, was the most active group.In 65 and over age groups,both gender had almost equal involvement in physical activity while other groups shows wide variation among genders.
53.3% of women had the maximum regular physical activity between 45 - 54 age group.52.8% of men had the maximum regular physical activity between 15 - 24 age group.
In males, steady decline can be observed from 15 - 44 years group followed by a gradual incline there after.On the contrary, Females had a progressive increase from 15 - 54 years and a slight dip there after.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ase from 15 - 54 years and a slight dip there after.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16847826087 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89986366364 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516304347826 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7261736647 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.2 112.824112599 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239654891654 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163065383746 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807153181931 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163065383746 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807153181931 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.