The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen the British when they went on holiday in 2012

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The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen the British when they went on holiday in 2012.

The bar chart gives information about the percentages of four different types of holiday accommodation which British people selected in the year 2012.
Overall, hotel was considered the most popular type compared to the others. It is also clear that while the majority of people from England, Scotland and Wales preferred self-catering holidays, caravan attracted a significant proportion of Northern Irish.
Approximately 55% of the English chose to stay at a hotel when they were on holiday, followed by around 52% in Scotland and under 50% in both Wales and Northern Ireland. Regarding self-catering, this type of holiday accounted for nearly a third in England, Scotland and Wales as opposed to only 11% in Northern Ireland.
By comparison, the proportions of caravan holiday accommodation in Northern Ireland ranked first in the list, at over 30% whereas the figures for the other countries ranged from about 5% to 12%. At the same time, camping accounted for roughly 12% in England, Wales and Ireland, which was nearly twice as high as that of Scotland.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20348837209 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87265200285 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8966771244 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183404987558 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896157257841 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112691620478 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132361639893 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13142009431 0.0819641961636 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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