traffic jam
In recent years, traffic congestion has been a matter of concern in different parts of the world, especially in megacities. Although actions have been taken to deal with this issue, there is still not a significant improvement. The aim of this essay is to examine several main reasons for this situation and to suggest potential solutions to tackle it.
The fact that traffic jam often occurs in major cities is attributed to a host of causes. The first one is related to the increasing number of private vehicles. Take Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam as a typical example. This is regarded as the most populated region of the country due to migration. The majority of the local residents have a habit of using cars and motorbikes for daily commute since they do not have to waste time at bus stations. Another reason that needs to be taken into account is traffic infrastructure. For instance, most of the roads in major cities in Vietnam are generally so narrow that they are unlikely to accommodate an increasing number of road participants.
Certain measures can be taken so as to reduce traffic jams. One of the first practical ways could be that the government should implement flexitime, which allows workers to travel to and from work at off-peak traffic hours. This would help avoid frequent blockages on the roads. In addition, local authorities are advised to invest in upgrading the traffic system, for example, widening small roads and constructing more overpasses in order to increase the traffic flow.
In conclusion, despite the fact that congested traffic is a common phenomenon in big urban areas in the world, changing work practices and road renovation would possibly benefit to a certain extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73021362846 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592334494774 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2975039613 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24742641989 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737450054492 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952687747393 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126905868355 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563094518766 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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