The bar chart below shows the employment of all male and female workers by occupation in the UK in the year 2005

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the employment of all male and female workers by occupation in the UK in the year 2005.

The bar chart reveals the proportion of males and females serving in different sectors, in the UK in 2005.

One-fifth of the total male workforce was employed in skilled trades, whereas only 3% of women held this job. Likewise, the administrative and secretarial sector attracted most women employees, but only 5% of males worked in the same domain. 18% of males were designated as managers and senior officials against 11% of females. However, the women workforce dominated personal services, as the proportion was 14% and 2% for women and men, respectively.

A similar proportion of males and females, around 10%, was working as labourers and catering assistants. Likewise, both the genders were closely competing for the designation of associate and technical professional. A difference of 10% is visible in men and women working as process, plant and machine operatives, where males were around 12%. In contrast, 12% of women workforce worked as sales and customer service executives against 5% men.

Overall, men mainly held positions as traders and managers, while women chose administrative and secretarial designation over others.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, so, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44943820225 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98311961731 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.5821809068 43.030603864 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123322296189 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584871640661 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966444290288 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110802304169 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133572435772 0.0819641961636 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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