The bar chart below shows the employment of all male and female workers by occupation in the UK in the year 2005
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of UK men and women employees working in different areas in 2005.
In general, while men had a tendency to work in skilled trades, women would love to have jobs as administrators and secretaries. Another point worth noticing is that the number of men and women working in professional associations and elementary occupations is nearly the same.
Looking into details, one in every five percent of men worked in the skilled trades industry, which ranked first in male employment. This number was also fourth as high for women. Next came the mangagers and senior officals occupations, with approximately 20% of men. However, males seemd not to be keen on working in the administrative and secretarial business. Last but not least, the bottom of this list came with personal service at just 2.5% compared to nearly 15% in the number of women.
On the other hand, over 20% of women worked as administrators and secretaries, which tripled the number of men in this industry. Nevertheless, women did not fancy being skilled traders and process, plant and machine operators when this figure was just 2.5% which was much lower than that for men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trades'' or 'trad's', 'trade's'?
Suggestion: trades'; trad's; trade's
...ve percent of men worked in the skilled trades industry, which ranked first in male em...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01507537688 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83105070776 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5129205086 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0627676127854 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299138223847 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521050221044 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583787188013 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689179799883 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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