The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates, the proportion of estimated jeans sale of company like, Mango, jack and jones company in Turky. While, Pie chart demonstrate, the information of projected market share of these companies in coming year.
Overall, jack and jones company was the most significant company in jeans sale over the whole year except the month of july and august. Similarly, Half percentage of projected market share holds by jack and jones co.
On the one hand, jack and jones sale will be roughly 450 thousand pairs in january, which is three times higher than mango company. While, as is observed, after the month there will be decline in sale to 250 thousand and reached to 400 thousand in june. Similarly, Mango jeans sale was started at 150 thousand pairs and systematic growth in sale until june with above 250 thousand. However, Mango jeans overcome the jack and jones during july and auguest about 50 to 100 times, then the sale remained stable following months with 500 thousand. In december, estimated jeans sale of mango and lack and jones was 600 thousand and 900 thousand respectively in Turkey.
Furthermore, 50% of projected market share was jack and jones in coming year. Likewise, mango comany and others carries the remaining half of projected share such as 30% and 25% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, likewise, similarly, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00456621005 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48873946985 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525114155251 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7487171557 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236883205825 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114585664401 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895466805731 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19116366301 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111859521964 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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