The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.you should write at least 150 words.

The diagram demonstrates, the information of central heating system works in household settings.

Overall, heater works by the help of several supportive equipment's such as, storage tank, pump, boiler, hot water radiator, small tubes and so on.

Initially, cold water comes home from the long pipe and went directly on the boiler and water tank as well. Boiler which is activated by gas or oil makes up the cold water to be hot. This hot water again pumped into the long pipe and detecting the heat by the hot water radiator. This radiator made by small tubes and remaining cold water pumped through the given long pipe. Moreover, central heating mechanism consist of four various hot water radiator.

Secondly, the all prepared hot water transferred to the storage tank. Then, the level of storage tank water went minimal, water tank supply enough water to the boiler to heat water through overflow pipe. Finally, whenever the owner needs hot water, which pumped through long pipe and attached with tap.

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Average: 7.8 (3 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'radiator' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'radiators'.
Suggestion: radiators
...anism consist of four various hot water radiator. Secondly, the all prepared hot wate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28320174406 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2327355255 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0487472458262 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345070215171 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601773884345 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624264985921 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827877753824 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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