The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The two given charts forecast the income and market share of two jeans companies namely Mango Co and Jack & Jones Co in Turkey.
Overall, both charts reveal that Jack & Jones Co will predominate Mango Co in the number of jeans sold and the rate of market share in the following year despite the steady increase in the sales of Mango Co. Moreover, both companies are foreseen to be the market leader in the next year.
On the one hand, in the next half year, the sales of Jack & Jones Co. will have a sharp decrease in February to 250 thousand pairs sold. However, in the next 4 months, this indicator will surge rapidly to approximately 400 thousand pairs in June. Similar tendency can be seen in the sales of Mango Co. with slight decline to nearly 100 thousand pairs in the first month and rocket to 300 thousand pairs in the 4 following months.In the rest of the following year, Mango Co will have higher income than Jack & Jones Co in July and August. But in the next 4 months, the sales of Jack & Jones Co will surpass Mango Co with over 900 thousand pairs and 650 thousand pairs respectively in December.
On the other hand, both companies are forecasted to account for half of the jeans market. Specifically, with higher sales, Jack & Jones Co will occupy 30% of market share. While, Mango Co will take 20% of the jeans market. The rest of the market share will be the competition of the jeans companies existing in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...housand pairs in the 4 following months.In the rest of the following year, Mango C...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nes Co will occupy 30% of market share. While, Mango Co will take 20% of the jeans m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ket share. While, Mango Co will take 20% of the jeans market. The rest of the mar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53667953668 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32118725836 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.420849420849 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1550382253 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209793729818 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117973574993 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798751183969 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182333248466 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716560192732 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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