The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.

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The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.

The bar chart illustrates the anticipated number of jeans to be sold next year by two companies, namely mango co. and jack & jones co.

Overall, it can be seen that the sales of jack & jones are expected to be significantly more than mango co by the end of the year.

However, moving on to a deeper analysis, it is clear that in January, the total pairs of jeans estimated to be sold by mango co. is around 150,000, but the count for jack & jones co is three times more than that. Both companies will experience a drop in the month of february. Later on, with steady increase, Mango co. might take over the sales of jack & jones co. by august, reaching 500,000 pairs while the latter would halt at 400,000 from june to august.

Further in the year, Jack & jones is predicted to take the lead again by selling 600,000 pairs in september and october. Manwhile, mango co's sales would stay at 500,000 from August till November. by the last month of the year, both companies are expected to face a rise. mango co's 600,000 jeans would be purchased in Turkey whereas jack & jones co will sell nearly a million jeans. to be more precise, the count would be about 900,000 pairs, maintaining it sales to be more than mango co.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Further,
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Suggestion: Mango
... companies are expected to face a rise. mango cos 600,000 jeans would be purchased in...
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Suggestion: To
...es co will sell nearly a million jeans. to be more precise, the count would be abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52036199095 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3082943795 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52036199095 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2703827352 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3571428571 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16243649373 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621680828869 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670509028971 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121569865694 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647660000154 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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