The bar illustrates the percentage of Australian who enjoyed physical activity regularly by age group in 2010.
In general, the percentage of women who participated in activity such as sports was higher than that of men. It is also worth noting that the figure in female age group decreased at the last point while that of male age group increased gradually.
To start with, when it comes to the age group of 15 to 44 in both gender, the percentage of male went down from 52.8% to 39.5%. However, the case of female's percentage began by 47.7% and went up until 52.5%. The group of 35 to 44 years old was the period of physical activity was unpopular in male unlike female's case.
Meanwhile, when it comes to the age of 45 to over 65 in Australian, the result was the opposite of 15 to 44 year old.
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, in general, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47972972973 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48856955929 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.8426087465 43.030603864 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334057560731 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169979689563 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162665879981 0.0843802449381 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245513295432 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185605145753 0.0819641961636 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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