The Chart below illustrates the number of Australian male and female with different ages who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that with increase in the age of Australian women from 15 to 44 their physical activity decreased, while for men this figure reversed. Women from 45 to over 65 increased their activities where at 65 years old both of them reach the same amount of physical activity.
Over half of female in age group between 15 to 24 years old did regular physical activities, while near two out of five female, from 35 to 44, experienced such activities, which is the lowest one. It seems over half of Australian men between 45 and 54 did exercise, which is the highest number of them.
Not as many female did activities as male in the range of 35 to 44 year olds where it reports 52.5 percent and 39.5 percent respectively. Furthermore, almost 47 percent of both sexes in Australia that are aged over 65 years old did physical activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun female seems to be countable; consider using: 'many females'.
Suggestion: many females
... is the highest number of them. Not as many female did activities as male in the range of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68208092486 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61173187227 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8553112951 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.714285714 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329275960779 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168983285579 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142145818082 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234965063995 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157514049993 0.0819641961636 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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