Given bar chart illustrates the percentage of males and females of different ages from Australia who did regular exercise in the year 2010
Overall, at the initial stage of our life males had dominated females in doing the workout. However, in the later part of life, the rate of males who did physical activities was beaten up by females.
As we can see from the chart males were actively participating in daily exercise as compared to females at a rate of 52.8% in teenagers of age 15 to 24 and this rate gradually gets decreased to 39.5% in the middle age people of age 35 to 44. Eventually, it gets increased to 46.7% in the old age people of age 65 and above.
When it comes to females, middle age women are more active as compare to teenagers because of the highest rate for women who are doing exercises are of age 45 to 54 with a rate of 53.3% as it is higher as compared to teenagers rate which is 47.7% and the rate of females who did regular activities at the age of 65 and above is 47.1% and it was almost equal to males rate
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...54 with a rate of 53.3% as it is higher as compared to teenagers rate which is 47....
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Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ties at the age of 65 and above is 47.1% and it was almost equal to males rate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28787878788 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40241117019 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.816792548 43.030603864 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.8 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6 22.9334400587 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271195986568 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150728977896 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557560000286 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189398924821 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10384266146 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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