From the well know saying if people don't laugh at your ideas you are not thinking big. There are many instances in history were people failed by listening to the other words. But only a few people have achieved their goals without thinking about others. Some of them were Edison who invented the bulb and Einstein who is known as the father of science.
Teachers and neighbors of Einstein used to call him half brain in his childhood but he didn't get depressed with their words he proved them wrong by his inventions. All these achievements were possible because of his self-motivation and attitude to achieve his goal.
Edison was criticized by lots of people because of his failures in inventing the bulb. He tried nearly 99 times, he failed every time and faced lots of criticism from people even his wife left him but he never give up attitude makes him a scientist and tended to reward noble prize.
On the other hand, there are few instances in history where people got failed with the pride that they only know everything, We have to learn from the doubts and criticism expressed from the people around us and give a reply to them with our success. These things happen in very rare cases.
Finally, as how we are using the inventions invented by those great scientists in the same way we have to follow the never give up attitude of them, which helps us to achieve big rather than listening to people words and settle for a normal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
From the well know saying if people dont laugh at your ideas you are not thinkin...
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Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ig. There are many instances in history were people failed by listening to the other...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... him half brain in his childhood but he didnt get depressed with their words he prove...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...ple even his wife left him but he never give up attitude makes him a scientist and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, well, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62934362934 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30143684666 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.583664296 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103379083322 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400144917534 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370774395165 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549500125617 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382939168948 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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