The bar graph illustrates the proportion of 6 various age group Austrialian female and male who had regular workout in the year 2010.
As can be seen from the graph, it is clearly evident that women had the highest the numbers for people who engaged in physical ativities, exception to in term of teenagers group
In almost all groups, the percentage of women was higher than the figure for men. The only exception was for the age range between 15 and 24 year, 52,8% of males and 47,7% of females in this who participated in daily exercises.
The largest difference in data for people of the distinctive gender was recorded for the group from 35 to 44 years old, approximately for 13%. The opposite situation can be noticed in the seniors group ,only 0,4% female more than male go involeved in regular excercises, accounted for 46,7% and 47,1% in respectively.
- The bar graph gives us the information about the life expectancy in Japan ,United states ,Korea and Indonesia and the table shows us the life expectancy between 1953 and 2008 .summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 73
- The bar chart gives us the information about the life expectancy in Japan ,Korea, United states and Indonesia and the table shows us the change in the life expectancy between 1953 and 2008. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 144, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to 44 years old, approximately for 13%. The opposite situation can be noticed in th...
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Line 8, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tion can be noticed in the seniors group ,only 0,4% female more than male go invol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67362425682 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4358514206 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203156121485 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112142532794 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711361528577 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133625836858 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558906714259 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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