The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age group who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information below by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrate the proportion of men and women of different age category who practiced regular exercise in 2010. Unit of measurement is percentage.
Overall, it can be seen that the number of men and women who exercised regular increased in percentage, but the number of women remained remarkably high with exception of the teenage boys which remained the highest.
As shown in the graph, the proportion of teenagers who participated in exercise (15 to 20) years stood at 53.8 which is the highest overall whereas, female within the same age range stood at 47.7 per cent. However, for ages 25 to 34, the rate decrease by approximately 5% for both genders.
Following this, age group 35 to 64 were at more similar levels for men and approximately same pattern for women. The proportion of men who exercise always dropped to 39.5 and 45.1 percent. In contrast to this, the proportion for women rose between 52.5 and 53 respectively. The number of women remained the highest between the three age group. Furthermore, older men ( 65 years and above) who did body training in 2010 almost parallel the figure for older women, 46.7% for men while that of women increased by just about 1%.
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...ng this, age group 35 to 64 were at more similar levels for men and approximately...
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... three age group. Furthermore, older men 65 years and above who did body training...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86274509804 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6753750541 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2755523354 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196268384202 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871767399698 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786646196729 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137500207227 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792815420742 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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