The bar graph illustrates the information about Australian men and women's proportion in six different age groups who participated in physical activities regularly in the time period of 2010
On scrutinizing the data, it can be clearly seen that 52.8% men participate in physical activities who were under 15-24 age. However, till the 35-44 age their percentile were decline at 39%. Moreover, after the age of 44 the percentage of men's intrest in physical activities were started increasing.
Additionally, approximately 46 percent of gray hair people who were crossed the age of 55 like to do physical exercises in the given time period.
Pondering further, 47% women loved to do this exercises in the age group of 15 to 25 and above 65. Whereas, 53% women's were noticed in the age of 45 to 64 ;however, just over a half percentage of ladies were interested to do physical activities in the age of 35 to 44
Overall, it is noticable that the majority of proportion of women love to do physical exercises in all groups exept the teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89325842697 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94984480878 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8989767493 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.166666667 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375498193559 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179153150834 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12599732167 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216439125389 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1348761942 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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