Art is a way to express feelings and thoughts without saying a word. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a considerable number of people believe that everyone can make art like paintings, whereas others think that only specific people who are born with special talent can create artwork. Therefore, before commenting on decision, both the views would be discussed.
Firstly, the question is arised, can every person create art? According to me it is only possible when they do hard work to learn all the techniques and methods which are useful to create an artwork. To be more precise, there are plethora of examples of individuals who dose not know a single letter of art , but now due to thair efforts they are known as famous artists such as , Pablo Picasso and Claude Monet. Moreover, it is widely acknowledged that there are variety of art course available which can helps children to build their career in art field. Furthermore, it is undeniable fact that after enrolling in these types of courses only few people are able to create stunning art pieces. This is because others are doing unquality efforts. Hence, it seems that only countable people are able to draw painting.
Moving further, people born with special talent have creative minds. This is a most predominant reason that they can create creative artwork in any situation. More so, in professional life artist may face burden for making some unique and creative art paintings. In this situation only talented individuals can fulfill their senior's demands apart from this others can't able to create creative artwork.
To conclude, everyone have thair own view points regarding this statement. In my perception, not every people are able to make amezing paintings except those are doing sufficient efforts to achieve their goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... seniors demands apart from this others cant able to create creative artwork. To c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11371237458 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56694347322 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5446294576 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426018535825 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123165437945 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805056378637 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243396678123 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10683416296 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.