The given graph displays the proportion of males and females in different age groups who regularly engaged in physical activity in 2010. Overall, it is evident that in the given year, more women than men performed regular physical exercise, with the exception of the youngest age group (15 to 24 years) where the proportion of males was higher than females.
To begin with, more than half of the men aged 15 to 24 engaged in regular exercise, while only 47.7% of women in the same age group did so. In contrast, the proportion of males aged 25 to 34 years who engaged in physical activity was lower than that of females (42.2% and 48.9%, respectively). Furthermore, women also dominated in the proportion of regular physical exercise in age groups 35 to 44, 45 to 54, and 55 to 64. In those groups, more than half of the women engaged in regular physical exercise, while the figure for men was between 39.5% and 45.1%.
Additionally, the chart also showed that the proportion of elderly males and females engaging in regular physical exercise was almost similar, with males accounting for 56.7% and females making up 47.1%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...en performed regular physical exercise, with the exception of the youngest age group 15 to 24 years w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80412371134 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52930533586 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463917525773 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5930021867 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.142857143 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325053633172 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179122342823 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736166431373 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223535805522 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858441769201 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.