Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that men have more competitiveness in their blood than their counterparts. I do not share a similar point of view with these statemen because of the two reasons outlined below.
Competitiveness is a quality by which both male and female individuals have in their blood because this quality is a basic mechanism of human adaptation in this world. What makes one is more competitive than another is the upbringing method. If children live in a family who are valuing competitiveness, they may develop this quality to higher levels. The recent scientific findings found that children having siblings are more competitive because they have to compete with their siblings. This makes them develop a desire to be a winner on every occasion to gain attention from their parents.
Another reason why children become competitive individuals is because of their life experiences. Some families enroll their children in various competitions to develop this ability. This is mainly because when children have to face other children in the competition, they have to win the match to save their face in front of their friends or families. This makes them think of a strategy to be a winner at any cost. For an outsider, it may be considered as competitiveness.
To sum up, although many people think that men are more competitive than women, I believe that both female and male individuals have equal quality of competitiveness. However, what makes them different is the way they are growing and their experiences in competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use of the two reasons outlined below. Competitiveness is a quality by which bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13888888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01796867456 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1638138001 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152812096828 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665990492905 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782249797916 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124683855807 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583064235767 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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