The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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the given diagram depicts the information a...
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...en diagram depicts the information about process of the cement making using diffe...
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... the construction of bulidings. Firstly,the blend of clay and limestone is crushed ...
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...d in crusher and then it put into mixer.After than,this mixer came rotating heater wh...
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...er and then it put into mixer.After than,this mixer came rotating heater where heat i...
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...here heat is applied from other end.then,he output mixer is grinded in grinder mach...
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...er is grinded in grinder machine and it produce cement.furthermore,the cement is packed...
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...achine and it produce cement.furthermore,the cement is packed in plastic bags. Hen...
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...ement is packed in plastic bags. Hence,cement production plays rudimentary role in co...
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...f buildings which is made by concrete. the concrete mixers functionality is about ...
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...hich is made by concrete. the concrete mixers functionality is about to as same as ro...
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...because both are used to rotate a mixer.To make a concrete,first cement and water ...
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...sed to rotate a mixer.To make a concrete,first cement and water were put in machine wh...
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...ingrident were 15% and 10% respectivily.Furthermore sand was added which was one forth of w...
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...ss because the amount of gravel was 50%.In the whole process gravel machine was ro...
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... gravel machine was rotating constantly.However,concret making process was less comple...
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... machine was rotating constantly.However,concret making process was less complex than c...
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....However,concret making process was less complex than cement making process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58823529412 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70216433472 2.65546596893 139% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.367942657 43.030603864 394% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.5 112.824112599 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.5 22.9334400587 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 5.23603664747 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222494178455 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130862704703 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838234265307 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130862704703 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838234265307 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.2329268293 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 61.2550243902 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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