The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in 5 different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000.
The graph compares the proportion of USA citizens living alone in several age groups from 1850 to 2000.
Overall, the percentage of five age groups increased significantly over the period, and the group aged 55-64 was the highest rate.
The number of the group aged 55-64 and 47-54 slightly grew from 3%, 2.5% (1850) to just below 4%, 3% (1990), respectively. The figure stayed the same 2.5% in the 37-46 age group over 50 years from 1850. In 1990, the proportion of the group aged 27-36 had a similar rate of group aged 37-46.
In 1950, the figure for four age groups above rose continuously, and the new appearance of the percentage of the 17-26 age group had the number less than four times the rate of group aged 55-64 (9%). By 2000, the proportion of the 55-64 age group jumped nearly 6% to reach a peak of 17%. The percentage of 47-54, 37-46, 27-36, 17-36 age groups also grew dramatically and reached their highest point at 13%, 7%, 8%, 5%, respectively.
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- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.Discuss both these views a 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61046511628 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39271558806 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6211602083 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30289111062 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167383686163 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692476138338 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227809570273 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644128740652 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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