The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line chart compares the percentages of people aged 65 and more, in the USA, Sweden, and Japan, from 1940 to 2040.
Overall, the proportion of elderly people tends to increase over the period. Besides, this figure in Japan is expected to overcome the numbers in the USA and Sweden in 2040.
The rates of elderly people increased quickly, in the USA and Sweden, from 9% and 7% (1940) to 15% and 14% (1980), respectively. By contrast, between 1940 and 2020, this number in Japan remained below 10%.
Looking into the future, the proportion of elderly people, in the USA, is predicted to climb quickly from 15% (2020) to 24% (2040). After surpassing the number of the USA in 1995, the percentage of Sweden fluctuates around 18% before reaching the point of 25% in 2040. Besides, the rate of people aged 65 and over, in Japan, is estimated to overcome the figures of two remain countries in 2035 and continuously grow to reach a peak of nearly 27% (2040).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6449704142 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44625718672 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520710059172 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6678358634 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198200732309 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093764219309 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490588487269 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13429455126 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233846946411 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.