The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides information about the number of social media (Instagram) followers of five world’s influencers in 2018 and 2021. From an overall perspective, it is evident that all of the social media celebrities showed a significant change in the number of their Instagram followers with Cristiano Ronaldo making up the highest figure in 2021.
In 2018, the number of followers of these Instagram influencers was between 90 to 120 million. Selena Gomer recorded the biggest in the year with approximately 125 million people following her on this social media, followed by Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande just below 15 million that of Selena Gomes Instagram follower’s number. In addition, both Kaylie Jenner and The Rock accumulated slightly under 100 million followers in the year.
The figure for Cristiano Ronaldo Instagram’s followers then experienced a drastic change in 2021 with the figure increasing three times higher than that of the initial year. In contrast, although the number of Instagram followers of other social media celebrities had shown a significant rise, on average the number of people following them on Instagram is roughly 250 million of people.
- Because of falling birth rates and better healthcare the world s population is getting steadily older and this trend is going to cause serious problems for society To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 93
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other type of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 77
- The charts show the proportion of holidaymakers of one region staying in different types of accommodation in three different years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some children find learning history at school very exciting while but many others think it is very boring In what ways can history be brought to life for all school children 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...overall perspective, it is evident that all of the social media celebrities showed a signi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40860215054 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83710039102 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6614481766 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.714285714 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0881503339962 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513805572296 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328860533935 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735834725354 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366906701589 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.