The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

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The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

The pie chart compares the percentage of people living alone in the United Kingdom in terms of age and gender in 2011 while the pie chart shows the amount of bedrooms in a single-person house in the same year.

As it can be highlighted from the graphs that most men lived alone at their 40s and the same for women at their 80s. Despite living alone, a majority of people stayed in houses with 2 bedrooms. Only a minority lived in houses with more than 5 bedrooms.

The proportion of men and boys in the age group of 25-34 living alone accounted for over 60%, which is 2 times higher than that in the age group of 75-84, about 35%. On the contrary, women at their 75-84 were more likely to live alone, approximately 74%. A higher percentage of females living alone was devoted to the age group of 65-74 compared to the others, which is 60%, 50% and 45% respectively.

Apart from houses with 2 bedrooms, houses with 3 bedrooms stood for the second most common option for people who lives alone with the percentage of 29,8%. A higher proportion was devoted to 1 bedroom households compared to the 4 bedrooms households, which is 28% and 5.3% each.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, while, apart from, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52153110048 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45142362822 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507177033493 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1321789885 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296243478124 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119884143069 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919697335749 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190248662997 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100022465507 0.0819641961636 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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